“Go” yelled Dad. He was yelling at the T.V while watching the boxing. during the Commonwealth Games. He was Watching very Intensely David Nyika looked strong Boom his opponent was knocked to the ground “Hooray!” We all shouted David won a gold and he is a Champion. “Wow!”, I Thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.
Good effort at putting in the punctuation marks Russell. Remember capital letters go after fullstops or exclamation and question mark and at the beginning of sentences and for people's names.
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